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Sunday, November 12, 2006

Two faces I can never forget (1)

Somewhere back in time,
Somewhere when reality and fantasy collide to become one
i used to have a dream
a dream I am ready to share








The wind is cool outside, its almost deep blue all over the skies; you could almost see the moon resting next to the new day’s sun. it was when you feel warm inside and feel the breeze knocking on your window waiting for you to play. She was six years old when all that happened. A child so divine and thought all was fine.

She used to run with joy all around the house, knocking on all the doors and shouting”C’mon Sleepy heads, Get up get uppp…!”. It was a weekend that day, and fueled with energy she was that dreadful day. She ran into her father’s bedroom and placed a little kiss on his cheek that morning, that awful morning. She whispered into his ears, “Daddy I love you” she saw him cracking a smile on his trenched out face signaling a conformation to his beloved child. She gave off a small giggle and as he reached to her little arm to kiss, she gave off an angelic chuckle as she danced with joy out that door.

Now she runs with morning tunes hummed out her little lips when she cruised around where she called home. She finds her baby brothers room, silently she smiles as she slowly opens the door. She didn’t want to wake her mother nor her beloved brother, not knowing it’s the last day for smiles to come around this happy home. Wrapped up with love her baby brother was that morning, when it was cold outside and warm in their hearts, her mother welcomes her with a morning smile and waves to her 'come closer'.


UPDATE!!

Now as the day started with a little girls pure spirit of rain, she awaits her family at the kitchen table. She fixes up herself a bowl of cereal and looks out the window as the little bits of food crunch under her baby teeth. She looks beyond her reflection on the window and wishes secretly that all coming days will be just the same.

She spots a deer, it’s the first she’d ever seen all those long months of winter. “Spring is here, its here…” she shouts and looks behind her as she point to the deer outside. Her mother smiles and starts to remember that promise she made to her daughter as she storied her to sleep one cold night. “Is dad taking me hunting today?” she asks with a smile plastered on her little face. “Yes, I guess its time, now run to the closet and put on your yellow rain coat Mona!” Dancing with a heart filled with love and happiness Mona was this morning.

Now her father comes down the stairs and looks bluntly at the mother secretly telling her “but she’s too young!”. She smiles back knowing what his eyes had to say. “C’mon Mona, before the sun comes up too high” she’s right behind him ready willing and able. She pulls on his coat signaling that its him everyone is waiting for. Now Mona’s father looks at his wife and tells her that since its her idea to let them out this early, its only fair if she made them a picnic set for all the family to enjoy at lunch time. She laughs so hard and excuses with Ibrahim might catch a cold this early time of spring. After this little push and pull of thoughts they settle that only this time Mona get the glory on her own.

She and her father left home and saw her mother wave at them with love warming the air around Mona. She could never forget that face of her mother waving at them with a smile from the house’s porch. Now as they enter the woods, the lesson starts.


You could have a thousand thoughts of why couldn’t she forget her mothers face, but will never guess what happened. Yes it was the last she ever smiled as she waved at her husband and child…. But still you won’t ever guess what went wrong... or right!!

On a scale from one to ten, let me know how much are you into knowing what went on next?

15 Comments:

Blogger FASHIONOLOGIE thought the post was...

SHOT GUN * WAHOOO *

***IF I COULD TURN BACK TIME ***
" somewhere when reality and fantsy collide to become one "

dont u just hate it when that happens

Sun Nov 12, 07:51:00 PM  
Blogger FASHIONOLOGIE thought the post was...

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Sun Nov 12, 07:53:00 PM  
Blogger ana-alia thought the post was...

ya be5ik!!!
couldn`t you just completed it?

Sun Nov 12, 08:22:00 PM  
Blogger Leo. thought the post was...

Double S"

no, sometimes it saves you from knowing how hurt you sometimes should feel..
well when i'm done with the post this would make allot more sense, and hey, there is no rape action invovled, all the more thrill..


Deleted comment,
Good thing i get them on email! ;)

Al,
well i had to make sure you're coming back for more! ;)
Ps: Blog Town Missed you!

Sun Nov 12, 10:14:00 PM  
Blogger SaRo0Na thought the post was...

scale from 1 to 10?
my answer is: 9849238409389759375939382084502395

Mon Nov 13, 01:35:00 PM  
Blogger FASHIONOLOGIE thought the post was...

well since im having a thousand thoughts and i cant really tell if i want to know the rest bc of what might happen ill give it an 8 :D but none the less im REALLY want to know what happenes

Mon Nov 13, 05:44:00 PM  
Blogger DETTOL thought the post was...

nice post, and ur usage of words show that ur smart ((msawwy fahim ma3a wajhy :P)) i give 10 i really like it

Fri Nov 17, 02:41:00 PM  
Blogger ana-alia thought the post was...

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Sun Nov 19, 08:43:00 PM  
Blogger ana-alia thought the post was...

yalla 3ad leo... you know what, i don`t think i wanna know anymore 0/10!!! although it seems it would have been a very nice story (if you were generous enough!) do you have any doubt about us coming back to your crappy life.
and yah i`ve been back for a while if you did`t nowtice..

Sun Nov 19, 08:46:00 PM  
Blogger Leo. thought the post was...

Swayroona
ouch now, I’m not sure how much you’ll like the ending!!

Double S
its hard to please you hua! ;)

Detol
hey thank you, and you flatter me.. no worries you can do allot better I’m sure
Thanx for passing by, keep comin

PS: you might want to check alia’s blog, she’s gonna run me over if she keeps that up!

Alia
I loved your post btw, very nice word selection, glad ur back in blog town. Don’t worry it is a heart touching story, I just need to be over with a few things in the university.

Sun Nov 19, 11:59:00 PM  
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Tue Nov 21, 07:18:00 AM  
Blogger zahrat ilma6ba5 thought the post was...

11
yalla

Wed Nov 22, 03:46:00 PM  
Blogger DETTOL thought the post was...

thanks leo

Wed Nov 22, 06:19:00 PM  
Blogger wastedchix thought the post was...

10

and ASAP! b4 i lose track and 4get the whole thing

Fri Nov 24, 02:32:00 AM  
Blogger Leo. thought the post was...

Sexy,
its not about you.. so la tit7amaseen bizyada

Dettol
No worries ;)

Wasted..
i had a note saying i'll delay my next post on this..


hope yall enjoy this crappy life of mine!

Fri Nov 24, 04:59:00 AM  

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